Such dreams

Last night as I went to fill the hot water bottle I prepare every morning and evening for the new puppy in our care, I over filled the kettle. I went to tip it as it continued in its rumble post boiling point and water spilled over my hand. 

This is the third time I’ve scalded my hand in this way. You’d think I’d learn, but no. I’m careless and always in a hurry to get the next move made, the next thing done, the next hot water bottle filled. I become superwoman who can resist such burns.

The delicate skin between my thumb and index finger right in the crook where the muscles join is now red raw, but at least it does not interfere with my typing.

The puppy is asleep again basking in the comfort of the red cloth covered hot water bottle, which emulates the presence of another life in its warmth, even though, unlike other life forms, it’s inert. The puppy has come to rely on it for comfort and it tends to last most of the day until the late afternoon when the puppy tends to kick into action and demands play.

Who’d have thought we’d take on another baby at this stage of or lives. A puppy is a baby of sorts with all the requirements of the most vulnerable life forms. It demands huge bursts of attention, especially in the evenings and first thing in the morning.

I sometimes tire of the puppy much as I tired of the demands of my infant children over the years. Though I remember well the urge to have another baby and another in my twenties and thirties when for a long time what mattered most to me beyond my career as a therapist was the business of getting pregnant and bringing new babies into the world.

Much as my mother had done before me. 

Who can resist such a tiny foot. How fast the babies grow.

It took an age before the urge stopped. An age before I could get a similar shot of pleasure from other events in my life and the longing for a new baby disappeared behind the weight of whatever next project evolved for me, most recently in the form of the book I seek to birth.

A writing teacher once reacted strongly to my suggestion that each writing project, each new book was like a baby. No, she said, we invest too much in our babies. You need to invest less in your book. You need to be able to avoid too much hope for its future, too much investment in the outcome. You need to let the book rise and swell – like a pregnancy perhaps – but you also need to be prepared to abort it if it’s not working. 

She did not use the human birth metaphors I use here. She used instead the language of people like Annie Dillard on the idea of a book’s structure ‘cantilevered’ in some seemingly miraculous way that only you can achieve in the production of a book.

Writing every book, the writer must solve two problems: Can it be done? and, Can I do it? Every book has an intrinsic impossibility, which its writer discovers as his first experiment dwindles. The problem is structural; it is insoluble; it is who no one can ever write this book. Complex stories, essays and poems have this problem, too – the prohibitive structural defect the writer wishes he had never noticed. He writes it in spite of that. He finds ways to minimize the difficulty; he strengthens other virtues; he cantilevers the whole narrative out into thin air, and it holds. And if it can be done, then he can do it, and only he. For there is nothing in the material for this book that suggests to anyone but him alone its possibilities for meaning and feeling. 

Forgive Annie Dillard her use of the masculine pronoun here. She was writing at a time when the masculine was the only way. We now know better. 

And the book I write is like the first dream of last night that comes to me now: I fell into it around 1.22 am – I looked at the clock when my daughter and her partner arrived home after a night out with friends. The dogs started to bark, and the older dog went off to share their bed upstairs while earlier she had shared ours. The younger puppy stayed in her crate yowling for maybe a minute to be let out but then when the door closed behind my daughter and her boyfriend a silence descended.

I floated into my dream aware that someone had littered tiny beetroot balls across the floor near the dog’s pen and my bed. I could not understand how they had come about, and I feared they might stain the place red/purple in the way of beetroot. 

I have not seen my father in dreams for many years, not that I remember but there he was in my dream, beside my bed, naked and insisting that he join me. I told him no, but he begged to be allowed in. 

He did not want to do anything to me, he said. He wanted only to lie beside me. I wanted to go back to sleep but my father towered over the edge of my bed clamouring to be let in under the blankets. 

At one point in this dream my son in law was lying on top of the bed beside me and my father stood over him, too. I could see my father was so enraged he could have leaned down and snapped the young man’s legs in two. But he resisted. 

And then I was again alone with my father. My mother had taken herself off to her bed in the middle of the house while my bed was propped inside the kitchen. 

I wanted to go back to this bed away from my father, but he was desperate. Naked and desperate. He wanted to be beside me. Not to do anything, he repeated, but he could not bear to be alone. 

I wailed and screamed, and he pinned me down. I pleaded with him to leave and screamed out for my mother. ‘Take him away from me,’ I begged her. 

I felt sorry for him but hated my father. I did not want to be with him no matter what. 

And I woke in a welter of perspiration and angst. The darkness of the night a balm to my overstretched mind. At least in this dream I could escape my father even without my mother’s help.

And a final word from Annie Dillard, who advocates ignoring your feelings when it comes to writing your book, much as my writing teacher, Janey Runci, proposed when she discouraged the book-as-baby metaphor. 

Ignore your feelings about your work. These are an occupational hazard. If you are writing a book, keep working at it deeper and deeper when you feel it is awful; keep revising and improving it when you feel it is wonderful. No matter how experienced you are, there is no correlation, either direct or inverse, between your immediate feelings about your work’s quality and its actual quality. All you can do is ignore your feelings altogether. It’s hard to do, but you can learn to do it.  

2 thoughts on “Such dreams”

  1. I have a child and I have my writing. There’s very little comparison. I get why people talk about their books as their children but the metaphor only works partially. The strongest comparison I can think of it that the writing and the child were once a part of you but now have lives of their own. But that’s it. My book’s were all answers to questions I hadn’t realised I needed answers to. Others make of them what they will. My daughter was an answer too. What kind of father would you be? Not the best and not the worst. A better writer. Now she’s off answering her own questions. I think Dillard could’ve added a third question: Need it be done? So many books exist that the world really has no need for. They exist, I suspect, to satisfy egos and delusions in many cases. I’ve strung fifty- or sixty-thousand words together ergo I’m a novelist. I would love to write another book but I genuinely have nothing left to say I need more than a couple of hundred words to deal with. Which is fine by me because a couple of hundred words is far easier to manage than a whole novel. And easier to scrap.

    1. It’s a subjective view, Jim, that there are books published that the world has no need of, though I suspect you might be right. The question is which books. Mein Kampf for instance, or Fifty Shades of Gray? I wouldn’t want to be the one who decides though to some extent publishers are. thanks, Jim.

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